Tuesday 27 April 2010

Metaphor Poems

Last week were were learning about metaphors, and how they can create really nice images that add detail to characters within your stories.  After looking careful at a poem called "My Headteacher" we decided to create our own metaphor poems.
Do you think they have been successful?  Have they painted a picture of the person they are writing about? 

2 comments:

  1. Your metaphor poems were really fantastic Primary Six, I'm really impressed with how much time and care you had taken to really make the images fit the people you were writing about.

    You can see the poems from the other members of the class on the display near the computers outside Mrs Kirkness' room.

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  2. li michael flannigan9 June 2010 at 11:35

    i found it quite fun to write limericks and myt davourite bit was reading the other limericks in miss scotts book

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